- Nov 21, 2018
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Alright no need to get into details. Last thing we want is fuss about whos life is more shit. Do what you have to do. Criticisms will come no matter what you do. Take what is relevant and ignore the rest. Myself included if whatever I said/say offends you.First of all, I don't wait a few days, my previous projects have been up for months.
Second, I had to create a new Patreon because I lost access to the first account, since I had set up Google Authenticator to have access and without it you can't easily login.
Third, if I'm doing it wrong then it's my problem, my reality, where I live, is totally different from your reality where you live, if you knew how it is to live in my country, you would know why I always focus on the financial return, working here is the same as being a slave, a lot of unnecessary effort and stress for little return, the minimum wage here is barely enough to survive, and you have to stay 14 - 16 hours a day out of your comfort to earn a pittance at the end of the month, is not work place, it's slavery. That's why I try and try to earn money with my projects, that's why I move on to another one when the one at the present moment after a good time, months, doesn't generate financial return.
Others have already mentioned the English and flow of the dialogue in general so I wont go over that again. But besides that, it would be appreciated by many if you gave us the option to name the main character.
Other than that, the music is good and I always appreciate when sound effects are added. Not everyone does but for a few, audio is just as important an element as the images or text. So nice job there.