mc was a hitman I don't understand how you don't get it mc could make him disappear if he/she wanted and the game won't be remade we have everything thought up already
bro, if mc was the hitman and trance knows how strong mc is then why trance is screwing with his step-mom, you are mixing story here, make mc strong and make trance just hit on her step-mom(not screwing) and mc try to warn him is one point or is that trance doesn't care about how strong mc is, he just want to screw his step-mom, clear this part of your VN and every thing sorted. and yeah, don't over work yourself with NTR thing, only make it when trance hit on mc's Step-mom enough that she is also becoming comfortable with trance, in that way your avoidable NTR goal is fulfilled too and audience will satisfy with your core like NTR but avoidable thing too. just don't contradict your characters dialogue and story line and keep it simple. just tell your audience that what trance status in the game is at the start like is he competing with mc for affection or is he already a step-forward than mc because then and only then your NTR scenes in the start of the game can be reasonable. Just think about it bro, give your thoughts some time and try to keep them untangled. You can do it.
