I feel sorry for the writing skill this game has.
as far as writing skill is concerned, it is descriptive without being too wordy. the way it presents its idea to the reader is just absolute chef's kiss. if I'm just rating this game for the writing skill alone, this is easily a 5/5. and that's the only praise I can give to this game.
the reason? plot. if you look at this in hindsight, it's really just a hentai plot. yes, a hentai plot that does all the excuses in the world just for the heroine to be a slut. if you've watch your average hentai then you know what I'm talking about. and it sucks, because such writing skill is stuck to this trash plot.
It doesn't matter how good and descriptive you are when talking about shit. in the end its just shit. you've seen shit, you've smelled it, you know its trash, so why are you reading trash? that's the issue.
as far as writing skill is concerned, it is descriptive without being too wordy. the way it presents its idea to the reader is just absolute chef's kiss. if I'm just rating this game for the writing skill alone, this is easily a 5/5. and that's the only praise I can give to this game.
the reason? plot. if you look at this in hindsight, it's really just a hentai plot. yes, a hentai plot that does all the excuses in the world just for the heroine to be a slut. if you've watch your average hentai then you know what I'm talking about. and it sucks, because such writing skill is stuck to this trash plot.
It doesn't matter how good and descriptive you are when talking about shit. in the end its just shit. you've seen shit, you've smelled it, you know its trash, so why are you reading trash? that's the issue.