kuraiken

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Dec 5, 2017
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The game could be very promising, but the writing is just exhaustingly clumsy. It's clear what the writer wants to get at, but it's like they don't quite know how to get there. I wish the dev would just get some english speaking writer and have them go over the dialogue, rewrite the clumsy bits, polish & sharpen the prose, and you could easily have something magnitudes better than what it's now.
 
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